I offer my services to all who wish them.

Live forum: http://www.thornvalley.com/commons/forum/viewtopic.php?t=124

Jam

18-12-2004 16:00:23

Yo!

Okay guys just as the topic says I am offering to all my service.

What is it I hear you cry? Well its one of my greatest talents and that is to come up with great sounding quotes. Since I have an extensivley detailed and impacting volcabulary I am able to come up with these things of the top of my head.

Here are some examples:

"To embrace the light is to evite darkness."

"Submit your will and know nothing but the blissful ways I can show you. Defy me...and know only sorrow in the ignorance you limit yourself to."

"You can observe what is trough the Window if you only open your eyes."

Need any quotes for certain fan fic situations? Just mail me with what your looking for.

L8tr!

Jam

Hazy Dreamstar

04-01-2005 09:20:33

Do you think you could help me with stuff in The Third Element. It's based on some charecters from my Role-playing game NIMH Mania.

Maybe you can look at posts and get an idea of my new charecters:
http://nimhmania.proboards23.com/


I will probably need help keeping charecters in Charecter.

Thanx,
Hazy Dreamstar

Jam

07-01-2005 09:30:36

Yo!

I would be happy to help you in any way I can. Just out of interest what characters are in your story? Aside from the obvious (Like the Brisbys)

L8tr!


Jam.

Hazy Dreamstar

10-01-2005 04:21:20

There's a scene where Timothy and Elliott find something and request Mr. Ages' help,while he's busy(LOL)

Jam

19-03-2005 15:32:45

Yo1

Hmmm this post has'nt been getting many replies so to hopefully spice up interest heres some more quotes:

"Go. let my name take the place of fear itself!"

"Do not bother to hide from me! For in the end I shall fine you and when I do you will beg me to stay my hand."

"Hope is the last defence of the rightous, fear is the only offense of the herrecticle."

L8tr!

Jam

leejakobson

24-03-2005 08:44:07

Yo1

Hmmm this post has'nt been getting many replies so to hopefully spice up interest heres some more quotes:

"Go. let my name take the place of fear itself!"

"Do not bother to hide from me! For in the end I shall fine you and when I do you will beg me to stay my hand."

"Hope is the last defence of the rightous, fear is the only offense of the herrecticle."

L8tr!

Jam

thanks for the sweet quote i will probably use that quote now can you help me with a quate on brutus dieing scene
it is to were brutus holds off a army of rats to buy time for an evacuation of thorn valley i was thinking of using none shall pass but i wanted your opinion first.

Procyon

24-03-2005 15:12:38

i was thinking of using none shall pass

Only problem with that line is you're going to get it compared to similar lines from 'Lord of the Rings' (Gandalf facing down the Balrog) or 'Monty Python and the Holy Grail' (the one, the only Black Knight before King Arthur). Of course if you don't mind that you could stick in some other lines from those films ("Tis but a scratch." "Your arms off!" "I've had worse." etc...). However, I'm sure Jam can sort you out with something that is suitably striking for this dramatic scene.

Jam

24-03-2005 17:06:51

Yo!

Thanks for the praise Procyon!

I will be glad to help you Lee. I have recently found time during the weekend and have decided to dedicate it to Fan-fic related stuff so I should have a few good quotes for you by say Friday night!

L8tr!

Jam.

leejakobson

25-03-2005 08:29:10

well take your time i am off for a week after 12 pm today

Jam

30-03-2005 16:08:31

Yo!

I have found time finally to write a reply to my own topic! Joy!

Now, in order for me to come up with a good line for Brutus to say could you please tell me what kind of a person Brutus is in terms of atittude.

In your story is he a gentile giant, agressive,quick tempered or arrogent? As soon as you tell me I will be able to come up with more then a few quotes quickly.

L8tr!

Jam.

leejakobson

04-04-2005 11:45:01

he is sort tempered. but no fool extremly brave and intellegent.overly protective of the colony and of his family. horrible at first impression {trust noone new} . takes his job way to serious for the other rats to be comfortable around him. despite all this he does hate gaurd duty and war but rather see it as a necessity of the colonies survival same mind set as many of the rats.his abilities in magic make him a gardian amoung the rats a new type of guard. arank giving to rats with magic powers. this rank does not give them any extra privliges just they dont get trained the same as the guard and they unlike guard members do not shift jobs they are solely to defend colony and its populas. while guards get shifted to new jobs every 6 months such as gardening. this was to make sure fresh sholdiers wer always on the frontal defense with the war going on. oh and i should mention he is mute he became that way by an attack from dragon during an arguement with his parents wich left them both dead. but he is able to use telepathy. the quate is for his grave marker.

Jam

25-04-2005 14:45:21

Yo!

Sorry for the looooooong wait Lee but her are some farewell brutus quotes:

"Come on ya walking flea pits! Death awaits you!"

"I arose with dignity and I shall fight and die with honour."

"By the sacred light you will burn!"

"In this realm of light darkness shall never rain!"

"In death there is peace."

Hope these help

L8tr!

Jam.