Slew724
24-06-2006 21:18:27
I love haiku poetry.
Mrs. Brisby
A small but brave mouse
She risked it all for her kids
Would we do the same?
Justin
Captain of the Guard
One of the bravest rats here
And very handsome
Jonathan
Mrs. Brisby's mate
The rats owed him a debt too
He sacraficed all
Nicodemus
The wisest of rats
Evil killed him, sadly, but
Never his spirit
Jenner
Greedy and unkind
He plotted to rule the rats
But died in the mud
Nimhster
24-06-2006 22:05:07
Good job Slew724, do you plan on more NIMH Haikus?
Whiskers57
25-06-2006 20:57:05
I like`m, the Jenner one the best, evil tries to rule but ends up dead, in the mud. Pricless :)
Slew724
26-06-2006 21:28:03
I'll probably cook up a few more.
:D
Nimhster
01-07-2006 16:05:16
I'll probably cook up a few more.
:D
Cool! Can't wait to see them.